Write a proposal to the bank asking for a loan to start

 You are going to open a small language centre, but you need some funding from a bank. Write a proposal to the bank asking for a loan to start your business. You must write at least 200 words.

1. Written by Miss Chang

"KIDS FOR FUN” CHANNEL

We are looking for funding to make interesting and educational videos in English about a topic that is very closed to children’s needs and interests.To meet the growing demand for our purposes, we need to buy a lot of modern equipment, many toys for children, new clothes for presenting as well as large areas for acting. Obviously, creating this channel will cost a lot of money and time, and the aim of our proposal is to ask for some funding from your company. We will be very pleased to receive your investment. Thanks to your help, we can afford to buy some necessary things for creating our channel.

We have some purposes in this channel: education, entertaining and commerce. We hope that we can help the children entertain and improve their knowledge. After watching the videos, children will be able to master the Alphabet song, the names of animals and colors in English. In addition, we also want to get some benefits from these videos.

The videos will be presented by programmers, thinkers as well as actors. We will upload new videos once a month. 

Thank you in advance for taking the time to consider our proposal, and we look forward to hearing from you soon.

2. Written by Miss Oanh.

We are looking for funding to set up a language center as a business opportunity having impressive financial benefits. That is a profitable business that may influence and entire economy. Actually English language has changed dramatically over decades. We are experiencing on expectational amount of international trade and technology changes. As a group of teachers we intend to predict the essentiality of using English to integrate with the community all over the world as well as the language centers’ significant impact on the economy.

We will combine on the factors like the target learners who we hope to attract, the potential locations, multimedia center such as Interactive whiteboard, desktop, protectors, multimedia equipment supplied for our English Language center, well qualified teachers, support staff and formal business plan. With the support of a web platform, we can easily manage student registrations and optimize the class system to monetize resources. Moreover we can set up schedule timetables for available classes, so that students decide for themselves when to attend and if they want to be in a group class or alone. We will be provided 20 classes of 500 or 600 learners.

We thank you for your attention and look forward to hearing from you soon.

3. Written by Miss Tuyet

We are looking for funding to set up a language center as a business opportunity having impressive financial benefits.We need to purchase teaching aids such as interactive , desktop, white boards, markers, textbooks projectors and other multimedia equipment supplies for our English language center. English language has changed dramatically over decades.Think about the English speaking world today.We are experiencing on exceptional amount of international trade and technological changes. As a group of teachers we intend to predict the essentiality of using English to integrate with the community all over the world as well as the methods of motivating learners'study.

We will determine the type of language learners that we hope to attract that is to target learners and identify a target market. Moreover we also research potential locations.

We will combine all the factors like the target learners who we hope to attract, the potential locations , multimedia center , well qualified teachers and support staff and formal business plan . With the support of a web platform , we can easily manage student registrations and optimize the class system to monetize resources. We will provide 20 classes of 500 or 600 learners.

We thank you for your attention and look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours truly, 

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